[中英] 想請問中翻英

看板Translation (筆譯/翻譯)作者faceoflove56 (小銘)時間13年前 (2012/03/07 01:07)推噓0(0推 0噓 4→)

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小弟要寫自傳及準備自我介紹想請問各位用字及流暢度,文法是否ok? 因為我是第一次用英文寫自我介紹升學要用的不知這樣是否合適或有什麼地方需改進的請不吝指教感謝~ (如果違反版規請告知 3q~) My department is the Department of Information Management. I had studied many program language and know information security management.I hope I could contribute to society in my future, so I will keep learning hard and will not give up. 原意：我是資訊管理系的學生, 我曾修過許多程式語言課程且了解資訊安全管理, 希望未來能夠對社會有所貢獻,所以我會持續學習並且抱著不放棄的精神 My name is SYU,SIAO-MING,I will graduate from national Taiwan university of science and technology. I am active,I had take part in hot music club and basketball team of information management department. My average scores keep improving because I learn time planning that make me work effective. My favorite subject is finance, because it related to our life and I feel Its' interesting. My interests are reading, listening music, drawing and playing basketball. Furthermore I have excellent computer skills, including word-processing, computer graphics, and web page design. I would like to be a CFO(chief financial officer) and hope do something for society, so I will keep learning hard in the future. 原意：我的名字是SYU,SIAO-MING,將畢業於NTUST 我的態度很積極,我曾參加熱音社及資管系籃球隊我的平均分數持續成長,因為我學會如何做時間規劃,所以做起事來更有效率我最喜愛的科目為財務管理,因為它貼近我們的生活而且我覺得很有趣我喜愛閱讀,聽音樂,畫畫及打籃球此外我有傑出的電腦能力, 例如文書撰寫,電腦美工及網頁設計未來我想成為CFO 且希望能為社會帶來貢獻,所以我未來將努力學習 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 114.25.23.119