Re: [討論] 一句英文的翻譯

看板Translation (筆譯/翻譯)作者zxcvforz (塔歐茲)時間12年前 (2013/03/19 14:09)推噓0(0推 0噓 1→)

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題外(?)話，一間公寓需要「燃料」是拿來做什麼？ ※ 引述《intandem (simultaneously)》之銘言： : The apartment is fueled by a renewable modern energy called denatured ethanol : ,and it burns clean and is virtually maintenance free, granting consumers : significant versatility and choice. : 這個公寓由一種稱為變性乙醇的可再生能源來供應燃料,這種能源能夠完全燃燒 : 幾乎不用維護,許諾了消費者出色的多功能性產品與選擇. 乍看之下會以為這間公寓的電都是靠這新的再生能源燃燒發電。再來看看原文： : The EcoSmart Fire is an Australian innovation - an environmentally friendly : open fireplace. The EcoSmart Fire is needs no flue and does not require any : installation or utility connection for fuel supply, which makes it ideal for : just about any architectural environment. Fuelled by a renewable modern : energy (Denatured Ethanol), it burns clean and is virtually maintenance free. : Featuring remarkable design flexibility, the simplicity of the EcoSmart : burner and the modular nature of its design grants consumers with significant : versatility and choice. 他寫 "an environmentally friendly open fireplace"...就只是個火爐啊！看原文可以發現 "fuelled by" 這段就是高中老師看上的地方。原文的主賓關係為： EcoSmart Fire is fuelled by Denatured Ethanol. EcoSmart Fire burns clean and is virtually maintenance free. Simplicity and design (of EcoSmart) grants versatility and choice. 再回頭看拼湊版，原來 "apartment" 是老師加上去的？他後面的主賓關係好像也因為這樣隨意拼湊起來而整個亂掉了。不過我只是個小翻譯，文法不好，高中英文老師的文法應該比我好很多。XD -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 1.34.120.80