Re: [中英] 請教這段文字

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感謝t大拋出一顆很棒的寶石我試著調換一下句子順序看看邏輯會不會比較順: 以下是在下的水泥混合t大的水鑚: If the entire publishing industry were a vast forest, then publishing a good book would be adding a seedling to the immense green. While the action requires support from a nurturing grove of diversity and vivaciousness, our task is to seek budding talent ready to grow and blossom, like a master jeweler seeking rough diamonds. We will invite more meritorious authors and outstanding creative writers to join our team, and to make a contribution to the publishing field. We believe that our publications will deepen the influence of culture and broaden the reach of information and thought. 還望更多高手不吝分享指正 ※ 引述《tengharold (RoadMan_A)》之銘言： : ※ 引述《rroox (rroox)》之銘言： : : 朋友丟來的急件... : : 文字如下: : : 我們將邀約更多優質作者與傑出的創作寫作人才加入團隊，共同為博大廣袤、豐富多彩的 : : 出版深林而努力。我們是眼光精準的伯樂，正在尋找千里良駒；而好書的出版需要繁茂的 : : 林木來支持，我們的出版品也將讓文化延伸更加深遠，讓資訊與思想的傳遞更加遼闊。 : : 因為自己不是native speaker : : 做中翻英很沒把握 (連英翻中都翻不好怎麼中翻英) : : 加上又沒啥天分 : : 但朋友的忙還是要幫所以硬著頭皮上.... : : 大概翻了一下 : : We will invite more talented writers and outstanding literary workers to join : : our team, and to make a contribution to the immense ocean of the publishing : : career....下面就有點翻不下去0rz : : 伯樂找千里馬可以這樣翻嗎 : : we are insightful headhunters looking for buried talents. (胡亂譯) : : 那個深林和林木真的不知道該怎麼譯才好... : : 還請各位先進指示<(_ _)> : 好久不見，丟塊磚頭出來 : We will invite more meritorious authors and outstanding creative writers to : join our team and contribute towards a more vast, colorful, diverse and : vivacious grove of published works. We seek budding talent ready to grow and : blossom, like a master jeweler seeking rough diamonds, because a good : publication requires support from a nurturing grove of diversity and : vivaciousness. Our publications will deepen the influence of culture and : broaden the reach of information and thought. : 中文句的連接 [...伯樂...]；[而好書...] 令我大傷腦筋 : [出版深林] 以及 [林木] 的 metaphor 更是難搞，尤其是中間插一個 jeweler : 但想不到跟樹林相關的英文伯樂 : 到最後丟出來的東西根本不像英文 (邏輯跟連貫性到哪去了 (．＿．?)) -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 210.69.50.230