[英中] NIGHTINGALE : Suggestions for Thought

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[原文] The craving for sympathy, which exists between two who are to form one indivisible and perfect whole, is in most cases between man and woman, in some between man and God. This the Roman Catholics have understood and expressed under the simile, Christ the bridegroom, the Nun married to Him, the Monk married to the Church ; or as St. Francis to poverty, or as St. Ignatius Loyola to the divine mistress of his thoughts, the Virgin. This sort of tie between man and God seems alone able to fill the want of the other, the permanent exclusive tie between the one man and the one woman. FLORENCE NIGHTINGALE : Suggestions for Thought. (4.24) 兩者意欲緊密不可分地合而為一，渴求和諧共鳴的關係；這大多存在於男女之間，幾許存於人神之間。羅馬天主教徒深闇此理，以比喻－基督是新郎、修女和基督結合、修士和教會結合，或是類比－貧乏之於聖方濟、聖母馬利亞(羅耀拉思想的神聖導師)之於聖依納爵‧羅耀拉來表達。這種人神之間的聯繫，似乎就足以填補另一種永遠專屬於一男和一女的聯繫的空缺。 (4.23改) 在兩個打算成為一密不可分而完全整體的個體之間，存在著對和諧共鳴關係的渴求；大多數在男女之間，部分則在人神之間。羅馬天主教徒早已知道，並且透過明喻(基督是新郎、修女和基督結合、修士和教會結合)或類比(貧乏之於 St.Francis*、St.Ignatius Loyola**思想的神聖教師－聖母馬利亞之於 St. Ignatius Loyola)的方式來表達對這種關係的渴求。這種存在於人神之間的聯繫，似乎就足以填補所空缺的另一種聯繫－永遠專屬於一男和一女之間的聯繫。 * St.Francis 聖方濟 Francis was inspired to devote himself to a life of poverty.(wiki) http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Francis_of_Assisi ** St.Ignatius Loyola 聖依納爵‧羅耀拉 He founded the Society of Jesus and was its first Superior General. (wiki) http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/St._Ignatius_Loyola [拆卸區] 1) The craving for sympathy, which exists between two who are to form one indivisible and perfect whole, is in most cases between man and woman, in some between man and God. (主要句子) >> The craving for sympathy is in most cases between man and woman. (主詞) (動詞) (受詞) (關代[非限定]) ～形容主詞 >> which exists between two who are to form one indivisible and perfect whole (主) (動) (介系詞片語) ～形容主要句子 >> in some between man and God (which is[省略]) 對同情心的渴求大多數存在於男女之間，一部分存在於(男)人和上帝之間；而彼此之間存在著這種渴求的兩個個體，應該是要形成一個密不可分且完全的整體。 (修訂版) 渴求彼此共鳴的關係，大多數存在於男女之間，有些存在於人和上帝之間；彼此存有渴望的雙方應該是要形成一個完全的整體，密不可分。 2) This the Roman Catholics have understood and expressed under the simile, Christ the bridegroom, the Nun married to Him, the Monk married to the Church; or as St. Francis to poverty, or as St. Ignatius Loyola to the divine mistress of his thoughts, the Virgin. >> This the Roman Catholics have understood and expressed (副詞vs) (主詞) (動詞1) (動詞2) (受詞放句首，強調用？) under the simile, (express＠介系詞片語1) Christ the bridegroom, the Nun married to Him, the Monk married to the Church; (simile 同位語[prefer] or [省略 which is]的名詞片語～形容 simile[?]) or as St. Francis to poverty, (連接詞) (express＠介系詞片語2) or as St.Ignatius Loyola to the divine mistress of his thoughts, (連接詞) (express＠介系詞片語3) the Virgin. (the divine mistress of his thoughts的同位語) 這種情況，羅馬天主教徒早已知道，而表達方式是透過明喻－基督是新郎、修女和基督結合、修士和教會結合，或是類比－貧乏之於St. Francis、聖母瑪利亞(St.Ignatius Loyola思想的神聖教師)之於St. Ignatius Loyola。 3) This sort of tie between man and God seems alone able to fill the want of the other, the permanent exclusive tie between the one man and the one woman. (主要句子) >> This sort of tie between man and God seems alone able to fill (主詞) (介系詞片語～形容主詞) (動詞+形容詞) (形容詞片語～) the want of the other, (名詞片語～形容主要句子) >> the permanent exclusive tie between the one man and the one woman. (which is[省略]) 這類存在於(男)人上帝之間的關係，似乎只能夠填滿兩方中單方面的匱乏；而在一男一女之間，這種關係永遠排除在外。 (修訂版) 而人和上帝之間的這種聯繫似乎獨力填補了另一方的需要，這是一個男人和一個女人之間專屬的聯繫。 (思考區4.21增) (未完) 1. 剛剛去翻了Suggestions for Thought這本書 (GOOGLE圖書)，小懷疑：全文中的MAN是否都是指男性，因為後文出現MANKIND一詞 2. sympathy (wiktionary) 1) A feeling of pity or sorrow for the suffering or distress of another; compassion. 2) The ability to share the feelings of another; empathy. 3) A mutual relationship between people or things such that they are correspondingly affected by any condition. [整合區] (最初) 對同情心的渴求大多數存在於男女之間，一部分存在於人和上帝之間；而彼此之間存在著這種渴求的兩個個體，應該是要形成一個密不可分且完全的整體。上述情況，羅馬天主教徒早已知道，而表達方式是透過明喻－－基督是新郎、修女和基督結合、修士和教會結合，或是類比－－貧乏之於St. Francis(聖法蘭西斯)、St.Ignatius Loyola(聖依納爵‧羅耀拉)思想的神聖教師－聖母馬利亞之於St. Ignatius Loyola。這類存在於人上帝之間的聯繫，似乎只能夠填滿兩方中單方面的匱乏；而在一男一女之間，這種聯繫永遠排除在外。 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 111.82.91.158

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