Re: [英中] 求詩中翻英
看板Translation (筆譯/翻譯)作者spacedunce5 (讀不完的書)時間13年前 (2011/11/05 23:24)推噓6(6推 0噓 17→)留言23則, 4人參與討論串2/4 (看更多)
※ 引述《cat1442 (豸苗)》之銘言：
把你的影子加點鹽
醃起來
風乾
老的時候
下酒
I take your shadow and add some salt
to preserve it
winddried
and when I'm old
partake with wine.
請各位鞭小力一點。^^
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◆ From: 122.124.101.2
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Well, there is no visible subject . . . and it's shorter this way.
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But then it wouldn't (half-)rhyme with "winddried."
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To me, this poem is too serious for contractions that don't conserve a
syllable; as for "partake," again, it's shorter and thus has more power (it's
also more concrete). Oh, you mean the colllocation! Well, partake is
intransitive . . . and has connotations of eating . . . so I guess it's okay?
※ 編輯: spacedunce5 來自: 122.124.101.26 (11/06 11:44)
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這麼一說的確兩半主詞不一……。
※ 編輯: spacedunce5 來自: 122.124.101.26 (11/06 11:54)
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