Re: [中英] 請各位高手幫我看一下

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※ 引述《neile (neile)》之銘言： : 煩請各位高手幫我看一下 : 英文的字句是否有文法或字彙使用上的錯誤 : 要給小六的孩子演戲用的，請大家幫忙!thanks a lot! 好玩好玩~ : Pig Guy has been defeated by Monkey King : Tangseng and his apprentice, Monkey King, are : going to the west to Seek the sutra. On the way seek : to the west, they stop by a village. In the village, West (把"西"當作一個終點) : there is a spirit there. He forced a beautiful girl : to marry him. The girl's family are worried. And they is , and asked : asked Monkey King for help. Monkey King got an idea. the Monkey King The Monkey King has an idea. : He wants to pretend to be the beautiful girl and tricks He will pretend (下面才要開始，所以我用未來式)... and trick : the spirit. And now, the spirit is coming. : 這時起了風聲，悟空便不慌不忙地也躲在了門後。 : 豬八戒大笑著耀武揚威地走上場來，嘴裡大喊：小娘子，我來了。 : 八戒：Darling, here I am. : 站在台上停一下，見沒有動靜，覺得奇怪，往房屋裡看去，見露出一段紅袖子， : 高興地一拍手掌。八戒：小娘子還害羞呢，不敢出來見老豬嗎？來，來，來，我們 : 就要是夫妻了，還害什麼羞呀！。 : 八戒：Darling, don't be so shy! Please come to me. Come on, we will be : a couple. a couple soon. : 豬八戒跑上去輕輕拉住紅袖子，把小娘子拖了出來，小娘子作出害羞的樣子，有時 : 又做出猴子的模樣。 : 八戒：小娘子，不用怕，我雖然長得醜，但本領高強，一定會讓你過上好日子的。 : 八戒：Although I am ugly, I am so powerful. I am sure that I can make you also really powerful. : happy. : 小娘子笑著點頭，抓耳撓腮。 : 八戒：小娘子，你高興的時候幹嘛要像猴子一樣？ : 八戒：Darling, why do you look like a monkey ? act (look是長相、act是行為) : 小娘子：我一高興就覺得癢，所以就抓一抓。 : 小娘子：When I am happy, I always tickle. scratch. (tickle是搔癢) : 八戒：高興就好，高興就好。我們快入洞房吧。 : Fine, let's go to the bedroom. : 八戒拉住小娘子就往房子裡面鑽。小娘子作出動腦筋的樣子，又把八戒拉回來。 : 八戒：哇，小娘子，你好大的力氣啊，幹嘛把我拉出來啊？ : 八戒：Darling. Why are you so powerful? , you're so strong. Why did you drag me back out? : 小娘子：夫君，你這模樣進去會嚇著我的父母的，還是去你家裡吧。 : Honey, your appearance will frighten my parents. We'd better go to your home. : 八戒：去我家？那太好了，我們這就走吧。 : Go to my house？OK. that's a great idea. Let's go. : 兩人走了幾步，小女子做出腿疼摔了一下的樣子，八戒忙扶起她，作出痛惜的樣子。 : 小女子：我一個弱女子，哪裡能走這麼遠？夫君背我吧。 : I cannot walk any further. Can you carry me on your back? : 八戒：背你？好，好，好。誰讓你是我的媳婦呢？ : Carry you on my back? All right. You're my wife after all. Come on. : 八戒把小女子背上：娘子，我們這就出發了。 : Darling, Let's go. : 八戒摔倒。八戒在台上走一圈，做出越走越慢，越走越累的樣子。小女子在他背 : 上抓耳撓腮，非常高興。 : 八戒：小娘子，你怎麼這麼重啊？ : Darling, why are you so heavy? : 小女子：不是我重，只怕是你不想背我吧？ : Do you think so? Don't you want to carry me? : 八戒：不,不,不，我背，我背。 : Yes, I do. I do. : 繼續艱難地走。小女子得意地在背上笑。八戒體力不支，一跤摔倒，小女子倒地之 : 後，靈活地越上台上的假山，先做出猴子笑看八戒的樣子，再做出摔疼了的樣子在 : 那裡呻吟。八戒聽到女子的呻吟，忙東張西望找小媳婦。 : 八戒：娘子，摔著了沒有？娘子，摔著了沒有？娘子，你摔到哪去了？怎麼看不見你了？ : Darling, are you OK? Darling, where are you? Why can't I see you? : 小女子（偷偷地笑，再裝作痛苦的樣子）：夫君，我在這裡呢。 : Honey, I am here. : 小女子：看你這麼辛苦，我也摔疼了，那就休息休息吧。 : You look so tired, and I feel sore. Let's rest. : 八戒：太好了。我們就休息一下吧！ : That's a good idea. Let's rest. : 八戒聽了高興地坐在下面休息，小女子仔細地打量他。 : 小女子（撒嬌地）：夫君，你是哪裡的神仙，我都還不知道，怎麼能嫁給你呢？ : 你可要告訴我。 : Honey, how can I marry you? I don't even know where you are from. You must : tell me the truth first. tell me about you first. : 八戒：唉，別提了，想當年我本是天上的天篷元帥，上天入地，八面威風。 : 只因冒犯了嫦娥，被玉帝貶下凡塵，錯投了豬胎，長成這般模樣。 : Alas! Don't mention it! I was Tianpeng marshal, I could fly between heaven : and the It's a long story. (Don't mention it 太字面) I was once a marshal in Heaven, and I : world. Only because I made a big mistake, I was punished by Yudi. So I : became a pig. But I did something wrong and was punished : That's why I am so ugly. : 小女子：你說自己是天上的神仙，怎麼連我都背不動，真讓人難以相信。 : You said that you were an immortal in the heaven. Why can't you carry me? : It's impossible! say in heaven, but you can't even carry me. : 八戒：我真的是天上的神仙，你幹嘛不信呢你。 : I am really the immortal. Why don't you believe me? an immortal. : 小女子：那你拿出點本事來瞧瞧。 : Show me some gongfu then. : 八戒：好，讓我露兩手來給你看看。 : OK, let me show you my gongfu. : 從石頭後拿出釘鈀，舞了起來。小女子暗暗點頭。當八戒的釘色舞到小女子面前時， : 被小女子一把抓住，往石山後面一拖，八戒被拖了過去。 : 八戒：娘子，你怎麼這麼大的力氣？ : Darling. Why are you so strong? : 小女子：有本事你把我拖出去呀。 : Pull me out if you can. : 八戒做出用力拖的樣子，沒有發現拖出來的卻是悟空。悟空一鬆手，八戒摔倒在地。 : 八戒：娘子，你怎麼這麼狠心把我摔倒了? 不要開玩笑了。 : How could you let me fall down? Don't kid any longer. fall? Stop kidding around. : 悟空大笑：呆子，看看我是誰！ : You Silly! Look at me. Who am I? silly! (雖然"you silly"還蠻娘的 XD 我會用 fool) : 八戒一看，嚇得跳起來：齊天大聖，我的媽呀。 : My god! You are Mahatma! Mahatma是齊天大聖嗎? 直接用Monkey King可能較好... : 八戒轉身想跑，被悟空攔住，兩人打了起來，八戒不是對手，被悟空壓住，不能動彈。 : 悟空：呆子，你可還敢在這裡害人不成？ : You silly! Dare you harm others any more? fool! How dare you bully people here! : 八戒：不敢了，不敢了。 : No, I dare not! No, no more! I'll change my ways! : 悟空： : I bet you dare not. I bet you will. : 悟空放開，八戒轉身想跑，被悟空一把抓住耳朵，疼得直叫。 : 悟空：呆子，想往哪裡去？ : You silly, where are you going? : 八戒：我已答應你，不再鬧事了，幹嘛還不放我走？ : I'll never make trouble any more. Why don't you let me go? : 悟空：呆子，我帶你去見取經人。 : You silly, I'm taking you to meet the sutra-seeker. : 八戒：什麼？取經人來了？ : What? Has Tangseng come? : 悟空：走吧。 : Yes. Let's go! : 兩人在台上走半圈，來到房前。 : Finally, Tangseng gave the pig a name Bajie. And the master are satisfied is : with his new prentice. All of them are on their way to the west. And they continue on their way to the West. 請眾高手努力鞭~ -- I let the melody shine, let it cleanse my mind, I feel free now But the airways are clean and there's nobody singing to me now -Bittersweet Symphony, The Verve -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 70.166.3.190 ※ 編輯: tengharold 來自: 70.166.3.190 (10/27 23:08)