Re: [英中] 請幫我看一下這句話有沒有錯譯...
看板Translation (筆譯/翻譯)作者johanna (HANA)時間12年前 (2012/07/19 12:45)推噓15(15推 0噓 43→)留言58則, 10人參與討論串2/9 (看更多)
> I argue that these forms of imitation and play
> represent a foundation upon which human culture flourished
> and that neither are prevalent in nonhuman animals.
> In light of these arguments evidence will be assessed suggesting that
> childhood emerged relatively late in human evolution.
試譯:我認為,這種模仿與玩耍正是人類繁盛文化的基礎,
(因為?)人類以外的動物很少有這些行為。
這個論點可以證明,童年時期出現於人類演化的晚期。(一定有錯 XD)
> 翻譯:我認為這種形式的模仿與玩耍行為,代表了人類文化蓬勃發展的基礎,
> 而且這兩種行為在非人類動物身上並不常見。
> 我將根據以上論點,評估表明童年時期在人類演化過程中較晚出現的證據。
呃,因為我不是英文派,所以只就中文來討論:
1.第一行的「行為」太多餘,(好比記者常說的「做一個怎樣的動作」)
「形式」和第三行的「我」也不是非寫不可。
建議不要把句子補充得太詳細,否則會顯得很冗長、累贅。
2.「非人類動物」和第三行的「將」翻譯腔滿重的。
3.「評估表明……」到底是指「能夠證明」還是「或許能夠證明」?
還是「要在後面的段落之中評估能不能以此證明」?
我不知道原文作者含糊其詞的理由是什麼啦,
總之中文這樣寫真的很難懂……(原文我也看不懂就是了)
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